Thursday 24 March 2011

Writing

For me the dangers of a society depending on computers is that people loses the real contact with their friends because instead of talking face to face or going out people stay at home talking with that friends but in a computer and this is not good, and is bad for our health too, because if you are seated all the day in the computer instead of doing other activities you aren’t being healthy, you have to do exercise, and is bad for the eyes too. I think is good to use the computer because they are good to be in contact with your friends, to study, look for information and play computer games, but not all the time, you have to be outside, breathing fresh air and relaxing. Another positive thing about the computer is that you can download all the music that you want and you don’t have to go to certain places to buy a cd or something you only have to download the song that you want to listen, so, I think the computer give us so many benefits but we don’t have to be all the time in the computer is good to meet your friends and being outside but all things have their good and bad points but it doesn’t mean that is bad for the people is bad when people use it so much.
Lucas Pujol

1 comment:

  1. Well done! Though there are some grammar mistakes we need to fix, the content of your article is great! Congrats and thanks for sharing.

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